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 ====== Fantasy RPG Design Challenge ======
-{{http://brentnewhall.com/games/graphics/Fantasy RPG Design Challenge.jpg?600}}
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-===== The Current Challenge =====
+(Photo based on https://www.flickr.com/photos/maf04/11519036964/ )
-*Design an RPG within the following restrictions:*
+===== The Latest Challenge =====
+Design a tabletop RPG within the following requirements:
+Thematic Requirements:
+  * No swords.
+  * No guns of any type.
+  * No dungeons (or dungeon equivalents, like widespread ruins).
+  * No undead.
+  * No demons or devils.
+  * No Conan-style barbarians.
+  * No elves, dwarves, or halflings/hobbits.
+  * The player-characters cannot be generic adventurers for hire.
+  * The setting cannot be just the standard Medieval Europe environment (peasants, barons, kings, Norman-style castles, horses, wagons, rolling farmland, etc.). It may include some of these individual elements.
+  * If your game includes monsters, beasts, or other non-sentient opponents, they must be complex and interesting, not just a handful of simple combat stats.
+  * If your game includes magic, it cannot use discrete, memorized spells with specific effects.
+Rule Requirements (here's where things get interesting!):
+  * Your core mechanics cannot involve rolling a die or dice, adding modifiers, and comparing the result to a target difficulty number to determine binary success or failure.
+  * Your game cannot be directly Powered by the Apocalypse.
+These requirements are meant broadly. Renaming swords to "blades" doesn't get you out of that requirement, and "swords" includes long knives, scimitars, katanas, rapiers, etc. If you're "skirting the line," you're too close. Make something different.
+For the purposes of this contest, "fantasy" is not a simulation of the real, actual world in the past, present, or recognizable future. Anything else is fantasy.
+The game must be playable. Don't submit a game where part of it is still an idea; make something up and throw that into the document. It doesn't need to be polished with all the margins lined up perfectly.
+Submit your game by midnight UTC, August 12th, as a post in [[https://plus.google.com/u/0/communities/112500174554658963265|the official Google+ Community]], or by emailing your game to brent@brentnewhall.com. I'll choose whatever game most impresses me as a winner, who will get a .zip of every game I've ever published. All entries will be published on this official webpage for the world to see and play.
+==== Winner ====
+  * [[https://plus.google.com/u/0/108010690094698713721|S Tan]]'s **[[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LfXGBzCTbN5IbOwvlgXf2HLNRsvNm7nOr1JASRsF83g/edit#|Midnight at the Library of Worlds]]**
+==== Submissions ====
+  * [[https://plus.google.com/u/0/102948091324311449651|Allan Dotson]]'s **[[https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B7UIaBHqyelDWHZSeUpSMXZSeGs|Bark, Branch, and Berry]]**
+  * [[https://plus.google.com/u/0/110526342272157695883|Jonny Garcia]]'s **[[https://www.dropbox.com/s/vtv9jfx073qwn3t/Conquers%20by%20Jonny%20Garcia.pdf?dl=0|Conquers]]**
+  * [[https://plus.google.com/u/0/100796054581088008174|天麩羅蕎麦 (Tempura Soba)]]'s **[[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YqWrOTEw-8jrGYCBbBlynBih14Fk8bhPDA-M7FzPvkA/edit?usp=sharing|In the Forest]]**
+  * [[https://plus.google.com/114391148889883612370|Stentor Danielson]]'s **[[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GMWSif16NHSqqylvtVs8KPfzGpb534OZk89u9McMzow/edit?usp=sharing|The Last Council]]**
+  * [[https://plus.google.com/u/0/100571158701343805526|Guilherme Rodrigues]]'s **[[https://www.dropbox.com/s/922a20ageor06gm/MemoriesAreUs.pdf?dl=0|Memories Are Us]]**
+  * [[https://plus.google.com/u/0/108010690094698713721|S Tan]]'s **[[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LfXGBzCTbN5IbOwvlgXf2HLNRsvNm7nOr1JASRsF83g/edit#|Midnight at the Library of Worlds]]**
+  * [[https://plus.google.com/u/0/111848129748569022572|Taylor Smith]]'s **[[https://drive.google.com/open?id=0ByjrNoRRxO7-YkFFdjVoQVk0VjQ|Onward Wee Beenships]]**
+  * [[https://plus.google.com/u/0/106515458671760087022|Russell Tripp]]'s **[[https://goo.gl/QhY7RY|OtherWarp]]**
+  * [[https://plus.google.com/u/0/116932540386279575846|Joshua Fox]]'s **[[https://www.dropbox.com/s/zaezw5ieb5y1avp/RISE.pdf?dl=0|RISE]]**
+  * [[https://plus.google.com/u/0/112068187331309773071|Rose Docherty]]'s **[[https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B9urHqUWLgHRZGlhallCWFMyVms|School of Magic]]**
+  * [[https://plus.google.com/u/0/114952706223333283630|Clark B. Timmins]]'s **[[https://beautifullymutilated.files.wordpress.com/2016/08/the-sea-is-the-world.pdf|The Sea is the World]]**
+  * [[https://plus.google.com/u/0/108344903304859200694|Tara Zuber]]'s **[[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1B0-iu1l9bwAvmylyBtJZrIuzHtHFvAekh08cL17kiFk/edit|The Sundered World]]**
+  * [[https://plus.google.com/u/0/101126823496630380540|Oli Jeffery]]'s **[[https://goo.gl/Lk015R|The Temple]]**
+===== The Second Challenge =====
+Design a fantasy tabletop RPG within the following restrictions:
   * No swords.
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 Also, you must write the game for this contest. Do not tweak a few phrases in a game you already wrote, though you can certainly draw inspiration and pieces from other games, including those you wrote.
-You have until the end of April (UTC). Post your game in a comment to this post or (better) in [[https://plus.google.com/communities/112500174554658963265|the Google+ Community]].
+You have until the end of April (UTC). Post your game in [[https://plus.google.com/communities/112500174554658963265|the Google+ Community]].
 In May, I'll post links to every game here and will choose a winner who will receive a PDF copy of every tabletop RPG I've ever published.
+For the purposes of this contest, //fantasy// is not a simulation of the real, actual world in the past, present, or recognizable future. Anything else is fantasy.
+==== Winner  ====
+  * [[https://plus.google.com/u/0/112080159356295847396|David Rothfeder]]'s **[[https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B511-yaR3CdxTkQzU29vX1VYOE0/view|Four]]**
+==== Submissions  ====
+  * [[https://plus.google.com/u/0/104394843626728208956|Khelren]]'s **[[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LJgSvNEliYhAd4ueOxls7A5h22VZj9sMal-dkMPyPa0/edit?usp=sharing|The Beauty in Death]]**
+  * [[https://plus.google.com/u/0/112080159356295847396|David Rothfeder]]'s **[[https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B511-yaR3CdxTkQzU29vX1VYOE0/view|Four]]**
 ===== The First Challenge =====
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   * [[https://plus.google.com/u/0/112234386288014033364|Jesse Cox]]'s **[[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lCq---UyhXvd7oPZ6LFhcBWKwyWkg_LNGy61ihk-1jo/edit|LunAurora]]**
+===== Brent's Advice, Buried at the Bottom of the Page =====
+What I Judge For:
+  * **Completeness** - Is this a playable game? Are gray areas and common difficulties addressed? Are any important game aids included (character sheets, play mats, etc.)?
+  * **Comprehensibility** - Do I understand how to play the game? Does the text move clearly from introduction to explanation to details? Do complex mechanics come with examples? Do player-characters have a defined role in the world (or is the concept at least addressed)?
+  * **Creativity** - Does this feel fantastic? Is the setting concrete and “of a whole”? How similar is it to well-known concepts? Does it go too far into obscure weirdness?
+What I Care Less About:
+  * **Polish** - cool images and such are nice but all the winners have had straightforward, Google Docs-level formatting
+Bonus Points:
+  * A compelling concept that addresses a real personal/social issue (without getting too icky)
+  * Minimal physical combat (it’s just been done so much)
+Advice:
+  * Include your name, a license, and a list of games that inspired you (if any).